Teardrops of Friendship

First drop for a broken heart,
Second drop for our last goodbyes,
Third drop for a new feeling of loneliness,
Fourth drop for the darkness left,
Fifth drop for the everlasting search for someone like you,
Sixth drop for the times i didn't trust,
Seventh drop for the time wasted by our constant wars,
Eighth drop for the thought that you cant stay,
Ninth drop for missing you, 
Tenth drop for someone who was true,
Ten teardrops for you my friends,
this what when you are gone i can lend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 4, 2011 at 3:32 AM
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Taylor Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Congrats on your win, Nivedita. Excellent. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
K. Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 12:59 PM
I sure liked your approach here, what a unique way to write of "teardrops" relating to friendship-- so nice to see your name in the winners' list, Nivedita :D
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 11:56 PM
Congrats nivedita on your HM in ode to a friend with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy special honor...
Hornschuch Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:33 PM
thank you for participating in my contest!~Michael
Mehta Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 9:40 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, nivedita
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Nivedita. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:54 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of adeleke, nivedita
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Congrats nivedita on your top ten sweet success in the top ten contest luv..with this excellent entry ..enjoy...
Adeite Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:57 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 9th place. Luv, Ade
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