Teardrops of Friendship

First drop for a broken heart,
Second drop for our last goodbyes,
Third drop for a new feeling of loneliness,
Fourth drop for the darkness left,
Fifth drop for the everlasting search for someone like you,
Sixth drop for the times i didn't trust,
Seventh drop for the time wasted by our constant wars,
Eighth drop for the thought that you cant stay,
Ninth drop for missing you, 
Tenth drop for someone who was true,
Ten teardrops for you my friends,
this what when you are gone i can lend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/4/2011 3:32:00 AM
Hey guys I really like ur comments and I thank all of U. I am also interested in writing my own books can pls tel me a website were I could post it?
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Date: 7/29/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nivedita. Excellent. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 7/26/2011 12:59:00 PM
I sure liked your approach here, what a unique way to write of "teardrops" relating to friendship-- so nice to see your name in the winners' list, Nivedita :D
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:56:00 PM
Congrats nivedita on your HM in ode to a friend with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy special honor...
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:33:00 PM
thank you for participating in my contest!~Michael
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:40:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, nivedita
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Nivedita. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 3:54:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of adeleke, nivedita
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:17:00 PM
Congrats nivedita on your top ten sweet success in the top ten contest luv..with this excellent entry ..enjoy...
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:57:00 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 9th place. Luv, Ade
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