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We are all children from the Heavenly garden... Regardless of the weeping that sometimes does us pardon... Crying in the vine when a favourite toy disappears... Where sometimes there is no sign of life through these mirrors... Standing in the rain...we cry and weep... Sometimes praying for that Eternal sleep... Trying with a heavy heart that has since come apart... With a weight upon one's soul, that has lost complete control... Crowning the face of each choice when truths do appear... Finding direction, changing routes not yet visible or perfectly clear... All of our paths crossed for genuine reasons I do believe... fate we sit in the shadows lost....wishing to perceive... Every last soul's wish that we could change what we cannot arrange... All the pain that does drip down as rain... We'll let the drops fall, whether large or quite small... Until love sets us free once again.... A co written piece by Christian McNeil and Liam Mc Daid

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Date: 9/5/2016 4:58:00 PM
It's all part of being Irish I'm afraid Liam, but I've learn to live with it. We are the eternal but melancholy optimist and I wouldn't have it any other way---- a superb poem---7 seems hardly high enough.
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:27:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful, powerful, but very deep, sad,filled of so many emotions poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Christian.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness.Just awesome!A very beautiful, heartfelt,profound love poem to be held very close to my heart.Just outstanding!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful! Great imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you'll be okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love, hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:17:00 PM
Very lovely collab....so sweet
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:18:00 PM
- An excellent poem, Liam and Christian (?) - Deeply written filled with longing, tears, pain and wonder - Best wishes for a lovely week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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