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Teardrops

As a tear stains your innocent face I’m terrified of what I can’t replace. The love that we’ve both lost Is going to come at a high cost. The smell of soil hangs in the air, Reminding me that life isn’t fair. Neither one was ready for change, But death had come to rearrange. Silent drops begin to fall And I’m lost in the misery of it all. The rain gently mixes with the tears, Remembering all those wonderful years. Even as I’m clouded by sorrow, I know I’ll still have you tomorrow. The grief has left me blind; But together, we’ll slowly leave the grave behind. 18-05-2017

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Date: 6/4/2017 6:09:00 AM
Sad but hopeful too, great write, Jane:)
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Date: 5/29/2017 7:47:00 AM
It was sad but a really well written beautiful poem, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 5/20/2017 7:32:00 AM
So much sadness in your poem, also an acceptance there.... Of something still there, but also lost.
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Date: 5/22/2017 3:01:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read, and giving your input. I really do appreciate it!

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