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Perhaps the rain that falls, are actually the lords teardrops.

As the rain pours upon us Wetness dowses you and I Meant not, to detour our paths Nor, to cause us grief or pain Sent to us Through sorrow What have we done The lord cries Dowsing us Not rain But fallen teardrops As they dripped From his saddened eyes And still He hands us sun To dry us all From the wetness That dowsed you and I

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Date: 5/1/2018 9:12:00 PM
I really like these reflections, Charles. This one is so gentle and poignant. Well done! Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/3/2018 12:35:00 AM
Let me know if you need any help with that. (: <3 ~Laura
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/1/2018 9:40:00 PM
Hi Laura, thanks for reading some of my poems. One day I will learn to add a voice with my poetry...I am so bad with technology (lol). Thanks for your kind words...Always a pleasure, Charlie
Date: 4/13/2018 2:02:00 PM
- I always thought it was the angels who wept when it rains :))) - But I understand very well that God weeps ... He sees what we humans do with Mother Earth :) - A lovely poem, Charles - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 4/13/2018 3:12:00 PM
Someone up there is weeping for sure.. Maybe both? Thanks so much for reading this Anne-Lise and thank you for the warm compliment :-) hiugs // Charlie

Book: Shattered Sighs