Teardrop

I'm like a teardrop falling down.  Slowly,slowly I touch the ground.  I am pure I am bright a 
teardrop shining bright.

I'm like a teardrop falling down.  Slowly,slowly I hit the ground.  A teardrop that falls to the 
grond. Slowly,slowly I disappear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 10:36 AM
It's rhyme sweet one, so you know. Do not cry we are all here for you. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
Haniff Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 4:51 PM
great I like the form...happy new year...always Maryam
Wiggins Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 1:42 AM
nice,,,i like *Breana
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