Teardrop

I'm like a teardrop falling down.  Slowly,slowly I touch the ground.  I am pure I am bright a 
teardrop shining bright.

I'm like a teardrop falling down.  Slowly,slowly I hit the ground.  A teardrop that falls to the 
grond. Slowly,slowly I disappear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/4/2009 10:36:00 AM
It's rhyme sweet one, so you know. Do not cry we are all here for you. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 12/31/2008 4:51:00 PM
great I like the form...happy new year...always Maryam
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Date: 12/31/2008 1:42:00 AM
nice,,,i like *Breana
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