Notes About The Poem

07/16/25

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First Place 

Contest by Brian Strand 

tear drop hiku

    s l i p p e d ~
                              ~
                                     ~
                   on
                 your
                         tear
                             d  ^
                               r  ^
                                o  ^
                                 p  ^

   to    r e a c h     your
                                       h
                                        e
                                         a
                                          r
                                          t
                                 •   •         •.  •
                             •            •             •
                                •.                     •
                                      •.          •
                                             •
                                       l
   let      l o v e        g           o               ^
                                        w                ^       ^
                                                               ^
                                                                         in  pomp.
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Daniels Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:40 AM
Well done ! It’s beautiful. Anisha. Xx.
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 9:27 AM
It's so pretty how you did these shapes!
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