Tear

If you see your reflection in the first tear I shed, always know that you will be forever remembered, forever treasured, and forever loved.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 10:56:00 AM

I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today George. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/16/2012 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations... This poem is breath taking in it's simplicity and imagery.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:24:00 PM

George, Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2012 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest George.

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/13/2012 7:37:00 PM

OH, this is so nice, to be loved that much. What a beautiful poem. Lee

David Williams

Date: 8/13/2012 2:29:00 AM

George congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2012 1:22:00 AM

George, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 9:57:00 PM

I really like this one. A well crafted little poem, George.