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Tear

Tear. Breathe now, All u can do is breathe, The pain is real, The tears will come, Breathe now, Your eyes will swell, Breathe now, Let them come, Don’t hold them back anymore, Let it cascade down, Let it fall to the ground, Breathe now, It will be over soon, Just breathe now. Don’t try to catch it, Let it drop, Breath now, Let the next tear fall, Why does it hurt so much?, Breathe now, This will all be over soon, Let them fall, Let them out, You don’t always need to be strong.. Breathe now.. Let it fall… Let the pain out, Breathe now, Its almost over, Close your eyes now, They will stop Just breathe now… its over…. One last time …..Tear

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Date: 6/8/2024 12:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:17:00 PM
jeff, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2010 8:13:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/6/2010 4:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jeff. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2010 3:24:00 AM
This is so real and heartfelt- nicely written Jeff
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