Teammates

terrific troop they are
though roughens group out on
tagball field running and
tagging other player
troubleshooting their plays
tournaments combative
thankful all are close friends


4/27/2021

Pleiades T Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
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Y. Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Hi Eve, You described your title very well. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Merryman Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Eve, you portrayed "teammates" wonderfully! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:22 PM
A real team effort spirit you’ve achieved hear Eve, what a great Pleiades I enjoyed reading, congratulations on the win, cheers David
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Eve. What a beautiful inspiring topic ! Love and BW ~ Mala
Canerdy Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 12:43 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Eve. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Enjoyed reading this winning entry. I wonder if all teams are like this? Way to go. Congrats. Thanks for stopping by with congrats. Sara
Daniel Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Team spirit always wins, Eve:) congratulations:)
Jayasankar Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:48 AM
Eve such an inspiring poem on the team spirit in sports and the unity among teammates during tournaments.. Loved it... Congrats on your win... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Oh, I miss my sporting days. Thanks for the reminder of the camaraderie and being tournament ready. Congratulations on your win, Eve.
Poet Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Back with my congratulations on a great win for a noob very well done, have a great night, with my best regards
Buehler Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Wonderful and heartwarming portrayal of team spirit. Congratulations on a well deserved win, Eve.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:47 AM
A well constructed Pleiades. Best for a win.
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