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Tea Time For a Bumble Bee

Hello little bumble bee Come and have a cup of tea A golden nectar waits for thee Taste the sweetness, you will see Yellow faces smile with glee We'll make a sunny place to be Please come and sit awhile with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/25/2009 7:41:00 AM
Love the title...a smooth flow that went down well.
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:53:00 PM
a sweet invitation of necterness.... very nice!!!!
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Date: 9/22/2009 10:22:00 AM
Sounds like a tea party. Beautiful work as always...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 9:49:00 AM
Light and lovely writing Carrie. But......they don't like being friends. Excellent write my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 9:11:00 AM
Cute poem, Carrie. We have many bees on our front porch - they love to sip the cat food. Many get stuck and die. What a shame. I can stick my hand in among a dozen or so without ever being stung. Love, daver
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:49:00 AM
Love the Rhyme. I can handle the fantasy but not the real thing. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:30:00 AM
Light and refreshing
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