Donna Jones Poet Couplet

Tea Cup Moon

I accidentally erased this sorry....

A tea cup moon hangs in the sky
Among diamonds glistening in the eye

A shooting star to wish upon
Falling to a world somewhere beyond

Gentle breezes dancing across water
Reflecting moonbeams one after the other

Crickets chirping, bullfrogs singing
In the distance people laughing

Alone on a sandy beach to reflect
Those important things I too often neglect

I'll fill that tea cup moon up with other wishes
And stay here till sunrise releases her golden kisses

©Donna Jones

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Robin Davis October 1, 2013 at 7:08 PM This was a very charming, sweet, sensitive and unique poem. The reader can actually picture the story unfolding. nice job

Debbie Duncan February 23, 2013 at 9:53 PM I love to read ones with moonbeams dancing,, I write lines like that. Thank you for reading "Deceitful" You have a blessed day ;} Donna Jones February 23, 2013 at 9:58 PM You too Debbie take care...blessings

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2013 at 12:45 AM this is so charming, Yes, that is the word for it: Charming!! Donna Jones February 22, 2013 at 3:25 PM Thanks again Andrea....it means a lot you stopping by

Betty Bolden February 20, 2013 at 7:43 AM this is very good my friend..God bless you Donna Jones February 20, 2013 at 12:01 PM Thanks Betty...likewise....enjoy those sunsets....and sunrises....powerful!

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2013 at 10:21 PM Hello Donna, a wonderful image you paint. a sad tint, of wishes.. a beautiful ending..LINDA Donna Jones February 19, 2013 at 3:58 PM Thanks Linda...oh to have do-overs huh??? Well its still OK....there is tomorrow and if not I won't know about it..have a great evening

Russell Sivey February 18, 2013 at 6:57 PM Still is a tremendous write even if you did erase it accidentally! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!! Donna Jones February 18, 2013 at 7:46 PM Always love seeing that warm smile there...thanks