Tatyana's Revenge

She stared out the bleak window,
the countryside boredom engulfs her thoughts.
He stared out the bleak window,
the countryside boredom engulfs his thoughts.
Two similar souls, lives so different, in the game of love: they are caught.

She who has the innocence of youth,
he who has grown tired of trifle glamor.
Her eyes caught the gentle sabre-tooth,
His eyes caught the gazelle of innocuous candor.
But it wasn`t enough to revive his lost interest in ardor.

For him she might be just another lady,
but for her he is the core of her first passion,
she spent sleepless nights feeling quaintly.
But when she gathers her valor for a confession,
he turns her down brusquely with a sermon.

Her heart burns with agony and distress,
he still feels nothing, nothing for the poor girl.
When she has moved on she has become a lady who impresses.
Far from her now well-sought existence, 
he realizes his past foolish resistance.

He seeks her once again but is left astounded, 
as he sees not a child of naievity,
but a lady of elegance who not a tear she would shed.
Chasing her, he tries to break free from their past`s captivity,
but she turns him down as he once did, with a sermon, without sensitivity.


**written December 9 for Francince Roberts English Quintain contest :)**

~for those who might`ve noticed, yes, this is based on Pushkin`s Onegin. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/9/2011 10:24:00 AM
HEy, great revenge poem. I really enjoyed this. Awesome!
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:38:00 AM
The best to you in Francine's contest Genevieve. Enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 6:07:00 AM
Revenge is sweet; but, sadly, she is now as jaded as him. Revenge cuts both ways.
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Genevieve Farese
Date: 12/9/2011 8:02:00 AM
Indeed it is :)
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