Tattered Hope

T ommorow talks tough,
A sking all already answered,
T ackling today's threshold
T hrough time's turf,
E voking equable emotions
R oundly rocking retentions,
E verlastingly entrapped
D uring dreams devastatingly drapped;

H elplessly hiding
O doriferous oddities,
P ushing perplexities past purpose's
E xtensively eroding ending.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 3:11 PM
I see you were going for alliteration too!! Great idea!
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 2:43 AM
Thank you Andrea. You are so much appreciated.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 7:33 AM
BEAUTIFULLY PENNED I ENJOYED THE VISION
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 9:32 AM
Thanks Liam
May Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:38 AM
great acrostic alliteration Alozor....thank you for your kind words....best wishes
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Joe. You humble me.
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 2:58 AM
- Lovely poem, Alozor Michael ... skilled and creative ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 3:27 AM
Thanks a lot dear. Love and appreciation all the way.
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