Tattered Heart

For I fear 
what you might hear 
upon my trembling lips.
I say no more, 
my heart is sore, 
they'll be no sinking ships.

Your eyes I see, 
they call to me, 
and reach my very soul.
But I retreat, 
I won't repeat, 
the life and love you stole.

You pull me near, 
ignore my fear, 
and plead with out a word.
My eyes cast down, 
my face a frown, 
I curse my tears absurd.

You lift my chin, 
you always win, 
and give a gentle kiss.
I hesitate, 
you're just too late, 
I can't give in to this.

You say to me, 
that you can see, 
that I still want you near.
But I must fight. 
Though I know you're right, 
it's more than I can bear.

I feel the ache 
of my heart break 
as I turn away from you.
I breathe in deep, 
hold in my weep, 
and bid my love adieu.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/15/2013 12:19:00 AM
This poem has a nice rhythm to it even with the unsettling words. An enjoyable read!
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:18:00 AM
Great poem,just went through that myself,can relate,great poem.
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:53:00 PM
KRISTIE, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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Date: 7/30/2012 8:53:00 PM
just a beautiful piece to read, congrats on having it featured this week
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Date: 6/10/2012 11:11:00 PM
Such a deep and lovely poem...thank you. Lawrence
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Date: 9/26/2011 8:51:00 AM
This my favorite so far. The rhythm of perfect words in verse go straight to my heart. This is a testimony of a talented poetess.
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Kirstie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 11:22:00 AM
Amazing poem you have here. One that I can Definatley relate to :) -Echo
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:25:00 PM
Magnificent Kirstie. It is wonderful seeing your poetry here today. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2009 3:47:00 PM
Nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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