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Tasting Drops of Rain

lying in the rain

           the drops mix with tears and pain

                                           flowing down my face.








"Flowing Water Contest"

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

December 15, 2010 at 1:18 PM

Lovely words Michael good luck in the contest.You and yours have a joyous Christmas and a Happy new Year.Thank you so much for your so kind comment.Teresa

Kash Poet

December 15, 2010 at 11:05 AM

These lines are so true Michael.Once this happened to me( and I was not a child then).All the best for the contest-kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 15, 2010 at 4:55 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Michael. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

Andrea Dietrich

December 14, 2010 at 10:33 PM

MIchael , is this for the tears contest. I was just about to say, you could take both these recent haiku and combine them for the flowing water contest.But I guess you have two different contests here you can use. COool.

Doris Culverhouse

December 14, 2010 at 3:29 PM

enjoyed reading your work today!

Carolyn Devonshire

December 14, 2010 at 12:12 PM

They say raindrops can hide teardrops, Michael, but for me they only produce more. A lovely entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

December 14, 2010 at 12:08 PM

Strangely enough I tend to love feeling the tears roll down.. Stunning write for the contest Mr. R, good luck with this gem ;) love Wilma

Francine Roberts

December 14, 2010 at 11:22 AM

wonderful piece, good luck in the contest Michael

Sharon Ruebel

December 14, 2010 at 9:54 AM

Hello Michael, The rain can hide our tears....at least This is so from the heart, Thank you for sharing As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 14, 2010 at 9:01 AM

how bitter rain could be sometimes --what a very vivid haiku you have here, Michael! --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 8:59 AM

I luv this one too.. Michael... emotional and romantic at the same time... sad but hopeful.. lots of imagery in every word... my W.K. ..your J.G. forever and always with luv..

Deb Radke

December 14, 2010 at 8:51 AM

This is true; that at times the rain feels like tears. That at times there is a pull to stand in a rain shower simply to feel the rain wash over us. That at times, we are so in pain, we wish only to lay down upon the earth and let rain fall upon us. Your haiku said all these things to me. Very good writing, Michael. Very good.