Taste of Real Success

I believe,
A light will fall on me,
This will make me shine like the sun.

I believe,
All dreams of mine will meet their ends,
I will get one what I have dreamt of.

I believe,
Now I am very close to success,
As dream is needed first before we act for those.

I have dreamt it, that what I want.
Action is the next step that I have to take.
My patients will support me through all pains,
My dreams will give me courage to struggle all fails.

I believe,
I should keep on trying the same,
Unless I get the one that I need to fame.

This or that, but it was only the way I thought about,
The success and way of living.

But believe me, now;
As my mom explained me the real success,
And she gave mystery of getting it.

I believe,
I should not kill the peace in me for my own sake,
Otherwise; humanity will die which rest in me.

I believe,
In being man of value rather than of success,
And, my success resides in keeping myself kind and considerate to others.

BE KIND, BE HUMANE, BE CONSIDERATE – THEY ARE REAL SUCCESS OF HAVING PART OF THIS WORLD
(Written this poem when inspired by my mother, love you mamma for making me a valuable person.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/8/2012 10:08:00 AM
Keep believeing! Inspiring work! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:50:00 PM
feeling seem to have an effect on you, good stuff
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Amit Valmiki
Date: 9/12/2011 5:41:00 AM
thanks Sean for stopping by my page. waiting for your next one,love and bless. Amit Valmiki (India)
Date: 8/8/2011 8:16:00 AM
really very inspiring and there are good no. of advices many have to follow...the success of a man depends on his dreams, hard work as well in helping others and making a good network of trust and true friendship. that is what I believe. Thank you friend for sharing.
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Date: 8/8/2011 7:49:00 AM
Amit Valmiki, done a wonderful piece of writing.. thoughtful lines depicting success as a moral value and not as the theory of Survival of the Fittest... Let Kindness and Humanism pervade and prevail.. keep it up
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Amit Valmiki
Date: 9/12/2011 5:44:00 AM
preserving humanity is what needed most in this world of selfishness. thnx Suhail for motivating me on writing such more poems by commenting such a nice words. good luck
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