Taste

Morsel hits palette Epicurean sin won Smiling pleasure now

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2012 8:51:00 PM

give me epicurean sin any day of the week, Tim. LOVE it.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/25/2012 5:20:00 PM

Wow! A very lovely haiku with a delicious pleasure of reading! Thank you for sharing.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/25/2012 8:24:00 AM

A haiku that says something special! Tastes wonderful to me :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/24/2012 3:33:00 PM

That is so succinct so well done- I did enjoy she says wiping her lips, Bren :) it is catchy hehe

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2012 2:33:00 PM

Nicely done,Haiku Tim. oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/23/2012 9:32:00 PM

This is a great Haiku Tim! You used a fantastic word, "Epicurean" in your poem, very appropriately placed in! The whole Haiku together Flows very well, I enjoyed it a lot! Awesome Work!!