Taste

  Morsel hits palette
Epicurean sin won
Smiling pleasure now

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Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2012 at 8:51 PM

give me epicurean sin any day of the week, Tim. LOVE it.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

January 25, 2012 at 5:20 PM

Wow! A very lovely haiku with a delicious pleasure of reading! Thank you for sharing.

Elizabeth Wesley

January 25, 2012 at 8:24 AM

A haiku that says something special! Tastes wonderful to me :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 24, 2012 at 3:33 PM

That is so succinct so well done- I did enjoy she says wiping her lips, Bren :) it is catchy hehe

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2012 at 2:33 PM

Nicely done,Haiku Tim. oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

January 23, 2012 at 9:32 PM

This is a great Haiku Tim! You used a fantastic word, "Epicurean" in your poem, very appropriately placed in! The whole Haiku together Flows very well, I enjoyed it a lot! Awesome Work!!

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