Tarnished Gate

Tarnished gate leans firm…surviving my youth’s wildly-drawn graffiti. 


              For Rick Parise: One, One Liner Contest
                           11/10/2016

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Rizwana Bhurani

November 12, 2016 at 7:41 PM

Congratulations......wonderfully portrayed.

Paul Callus

November 11, 2016 at 1:25 PM

Came back to reread this entry, Nette; could not believe it was not on the list!! I still like it:) hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

November 10, 2016 at 1:57 AM

Excellent. Brings lots of sweet memories back. Very creative. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus

November 9, 2016 at 4:54 PM

I wonder what your graffiti look like, Nette! Mine used to mostly show windmills, flowers and birds. Enjoyed this one-liner; I like being taken back in time:) hugs // paul