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Tarnished Dreams

"Midnight cast its cloudy beams From the gloom the shadows went Smudging all the tarnished dreams" Cimmerian moonlight gleams As troubled thoughts spread their scent Midnight cast its cloudy beams Reigning in nightmarish screams Whispers of silence lament Smudging all the tarnished dreams Mindful of the starry streams Groggy eyes nod their assent Midnight cast its cloudy beams Aware of night's darkened schemes Sleep vanishes in torment Smudging all the tarnished dreams Haggard mind in its extremes Longs for peace to feel content Midnight cast its cloudy beams Smudging all the tarnished dreams 04.26.2021 For Joseph May's "Choose your form" contest

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Date: 5/18/2021 2:29:00 PM
what a beautifully flowing villanelle, many congrats on your win Jo:-) hug jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2021 5:38:00 AM
Very nicely rendered Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/13/2021 5:06:00 PM
This form is too much of a challenge for me Jo. You did a fine job! Congratulations on your first placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/13/2021 9:00:00 AM
Great imagery and it flows smoothly. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/26/2021 10:05:00 AM
Wow Jo. What a great Villanelle. I doubt if I would ever be able to write one. I'm sure it will rate high.
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