Taquila, Strikes Again!

orange nightgown
               on the floor –
tequila sunrise






© Kristin Reynolds 3 5 09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Very clever, Kristin!
Tugaff Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 11:26 PM
Hello Kristin, This is a good one. It reminds me of my teen-age escapades. Viva San Pedro! Keep on writing. Ernilando
Joe Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 12:40 PM
I don't have time for poems like this because they always seem so pretentious. But not this. This poem has all the beauty and emotion of the painting 'Red ballon' by Max Ernst. It says all that it needs to!
Richards Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Don't forget the consequences!!! Oh the he__ .....with conseqences!! You only live once!! :)
Kelly Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 12:48 PM
White underpants on the mat - MOONING .. Souper , short write , Souper K .. Cheers ... ( sorry , Slainte ) !! ...
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Viva Jose Cuervo!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vince
Strand Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 8:02 AM
Excellent Kristin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your blog comments.
Degenhardt Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 6:01 AM
hmmm, sounds like Tequila does a lot more for you than for me LOL Excellent visuals! Michael
Winter Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 5:34 AM
Oh this is too good. I can just imagine you waking up looking at the nightgown and writing this in your head. So awesome! Smiling big here. Love, Shar
Atanacio Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 5:10 AM
yeah-- she had it coming trying to our-tequila me.. very nicely arranged :)
Ginn Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 5:04 AM
This isn't where I thought this would go when I read the title, ha. Its so beautiful Kristin, wonderfully imaginative.
Higgins Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 3:58 AM
That is beautiful my friend.. love the smoothness and sexiness of this piece..little said and plentiful of images pouring out..I love the idea of a orange nightgown infuse with the sun..very nice..have a shot or two on me.
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