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Tapestry of Seasons - Hc

~   Three seasons, breathing ...

                  Exhale, inhale ... two transform -

          One, keen, waits breathless.



   One year of change weaves intervals, progressed,

             Three churning life, while two ... flank life at rest.   ~






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Charliekucoup" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Duet Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 2:49 PM
I really like this one, Greg. It makes you think and reflect upon the wonders and beauty of nature's seasons. Short and sweet. Congrats on your win too. FAVED.
Barden Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Carole, and I so appreciate it - blessings to you, my friend! :-) <3
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March 7, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Beautiful Charliekucoup Greg! Congratulations on your top win my friend. xomo <3
Barden Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Many kind thanks, Maureen.
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 4:47 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Gregory :) -
Barden Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Thank you very much, Sunshine! :-) <3
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March 6, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Just wonderful, buddy. Congratulations.
Barden Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Thanks so much, my friend - blessings! :-) <3
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March 6, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Love the whole poem, Greg. The last line was perfect! Congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie
Barden Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Thank you so much, Charlei, I so greatly appreciate it my friend - sorry for so late thanking you, but many emergencies of late. Blessings! :-)
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