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Tangled Webs

Should we write in form to make a shape Or let our minds run free, associate? Such tangled webs within the mind are draped Oh, to run as free as antelopes But from sharp tigers noone will escape Can we control , disarm within a shape? Love’s enacted falsely , making rape Inside our hearts shall we recover hope? Such tangled webs the curtained mind creates Round the marbled minds we half dazed traipse Wherever we go hunting, we’re too late Can we control our fear within a shape? Collapsing faith cracks , can we concentrate Or from the deal , do we dissociate? Such tangled webs of mind make ripe our hate Now sex compels but will can’t procreate Can kindness smile and friendship instigate? Should we write in form when we love shape? Our mingled maps of mind might mangle fate

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Date: 5/17/2019 7:24:00 PM
Katherine, this line alone had me smiling. "Such tangled webs the curtained mind creates" This is so true; the mind is curtained to the point, oftentimes I have no idea what is being created until it has been finished. Nice one.
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 7/18/2019 3:30:00 PM
I apologise for missing your comment,Carin.I see you share my experiences of our minds.Thank you very much,Katherine

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