Tangled Up In Blue

I was walking, walking away
From a life so tripped up, tangled up in blue 

Who are you...?
That dares to define this heart of mine
And when the tears stream down my face they burn
and remembering those words
They hurt
And when the cold wind blows you know it's best
to wait for the stillness of the night
The night
The stillness of the night...

I was walking so slow upon the path
no mind to the past yet here you are
Who are you...?
To meet me when I'm fine
That dares to define
my persona and my mind
and when your bitterness is tangled up in me
 more and more I fight to be free
Subsiding within these emotions leaving me
so tangled, tangled up in blue


And as once more I walk away from the pain, the past
I look around me only to see the aftermath
Who dares to define who I am?
And when I'm tangled up in blue,
I know its only for a time in which I'll find
the sun so bright on the horizon yonder over there
but from where I stand the warmth comes from a tear
burning, streaming down my face

Tangled up and left here so remote
But if I may say, that even in the darkest times
I have faith to get me through
yes, though I'm tangled up in blue
A ray of hope

I was walking away from a life with you,
so tripped up,
and tangled
in shades of blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/22/2013 2:04:00 AM
This is fantastic, it reads like a song. Well done.
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Date: 10/14/2013 7:46:00 AM
† I Like This It's Cool! The Rhythm Is Upbeat Fast And Keeps The Toes Tapping; Good Job. Tangled Up In Blue, Dig That And You, So Sweet Your Encouraging As Kind Visit; Thank You. Have A Beautiful Day, Precious Lucinda Price, Love, John
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Date: 10/9/2013 3:51:00 PM
amazing poetry, and what away to write a poem, this in itself so therapeutic, and does wonders for the reader, clever poetry Cindy,,, clever poet....
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:51:00 PM
Aww... Don't be blue on your B-day... Your just another year filled with wisdom, that's all. :o) I did find it quite amazing that our writes were so connected like they were. Kinda cool.... Nice to see you again. Happy B-Day!!! And try to over come your sadness. Be well, my friend.
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:48:00 AM
Fantastic! This is how it should be done! Fight through the pain, embrace the hope & joy at the finish line. Embrace the "blue"... =)
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Date: 10/9/2013 5:06:00 AM
- A deep and very touching poem Cindy, skillfully written! - Congratulations on your B-day yesterday, hope you had a nice day!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:13:00 PM
Wow, Cindy! The title pulled me in but the beauty and poignance of the lines kept me 'til the end. Tangled up in blue with shades of hope...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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