Notes About The Poem

Tangibles

What’s hiding in the attic
Nothing but dusty boxes of sentimental relics
~ past I can’t let go



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 5:29 PM
this is short but powerful...its a bit true of me :-)
Gauthier Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:08 PM
it's quite a minimalist form ~ thanks, Sara
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