Hemi Lewis Poet I do not know?

Tangible

In this world of tangibility it has given me the architectural plan to build my world

So my foundation must be right as I have seen it with my own sight

And what I see with my exterior eyes has to be the truth 

For it allows my tangible world to be right

Now all I do is focus my actions from with out to deal with the hurt from with in
 
My mind is now the CEO and has stop me from the right of accepting the life burning 
within

From my world of tangibility I don’t know how to deal with the life with in

For it is intangible and I cant understand it as it does not fit with my life

Now I must think how to bring my hart up to speed

And stop my mind from being my CEO

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Dinda Minardi July 8, 2011 at 7:11 AM this is very interesting... reminds me of Inception movie! :) and thanx for your kind comment on my poem... appreciate it! :)

Bl Devnath June 24, 2011 at 11:24 PM Nice feeling. Last lines focuses the real spirit of this poem, I think. " Now I must ...........being my CEO. Carry on...... love, bl

Lisa Cooper June 19, 2011 at 9:44 PM thank you for sharing your work with poetrysoup. your poetry and comments are deeply appreciated