Tangerines

In somnolence of tangerines peeling Thin skin reveals love segments Sweet and sour memories ONE KIMO 10,7,6, Syllable Count ONE ONLY - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY 10/09/2016

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Casarah Nance

Date: 10/18/2016 5:07:00 PM

sweet and sour memories, great ending line, very well done ;)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 10/17/2016 12:01:00 AM

Great write Rajat - congratulations on your placement. Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:25:00 PM

wow, you did fantastic with your kimo. It's brilliant and BIG congrats on your win.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/16/2016 2:13:00 PM

love this one Rajat :) Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2016 1:54:00 PM

This is poetically beautiful, Rajat! A most deserving winner! Congratulations. Regards // paul

Rick Parise

Date: 10/16/2016 1:47:00 PM

Excellent !!! Congrats to you.......Love it

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/16/2016 1:45:00 PM

Hearty congrats on your great win dear Rajat, lovely memories, nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2016 12:16:00 PM

- Lovely memories, Rajat - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)