Tangerines

In somnolence of tangerines  peeling
                                Thin skin reveals  love segments
                                    Sweet and sour memories  














ONE KIMO 10,7,6, Syllable Count ONE ONLY - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Rick Parise
RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
10/09/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nance Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:07 PM
sweet and sour memories, great ending line, very well done ;)
Van Der Merwe Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Great write Rajat - congratulations on your placement. Mark
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:25 PM
wow, you did fantastic with your kimo. It's brilliant and BIG congrats on your win.
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:13 PM
love this one Rajat :) Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:54 PM
This is poetically beautiful, Rajat! A most deserving winner! Congratulations. Regards // paul
Nayak Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Hearty congrats on your great win dear Rajat, lovely memories, nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)
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October 9, 2016 at 12:16 PM
- Lovely memories, Rajat - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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