Tangerine Mist

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an enshrouded dawn all lost in thick orange mist in a one hued world redbirds are waiting with their celebration song a tune that's agelong tangy dewy blooms of a vivid magic morn wait for butterflies

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 8/25/2022 6:18:00 PM

A vivid magic morn for sure. Serious, short and sweet! Robert

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/25/2022 9:20:00 PM

Thank you for your gladdening remarks. :) Evelyn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/24/2022 10:18:00 PM

Have never seen a tangerine dawn. I guess I've been living in all the wrong places. Beautifully presented! :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/24/2022 10:32:00 PM

It happens once in a while, though it's easy to sleep through. :0 Thanks so much for the compliment. Best wishes, Evelyn

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/22/2022 9:48:00 PM

Magnificent picture and even better poem. I like who you use colors.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/22/2022 10:28:00 PM

Thank you for the thrill of your appreciation. :)