Tan, Tan, Tan

Well she got her magic nose
And she looks like the best snowman now
Though she’s brand new on the front lawn
Compared to all of the old snowmen now
But with that magic carrot
She will show all of the other snowmen how

To get a tan, tan, tan
Before all the winter snow melts away

Well she stands there all day
As the temperature keeps going up now
Without ever melting even 
One of her teeny tiny snowflakes now
While other snowmen start to
Melt and look like piles put there from the truck plow

She’ll get a tan, tan, tan
Before all the winter snow melts away

Well she knew all along
That all the other’s wanted her nose now
And since they took both of her arms
There would be no way to protect herself now
But then the sun came out strong
And melted the other snow men anyhow

So she’ll get a tan, tan, tan, since the sun melted them all away
So she’ll get a tan, tan, tan, since the sun melted them all away

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Date: 1/5/2024 5:08:00 PM
Very good to sing to David, you did it well. Congratulations on your win in Miranda’s contest… Belle
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:44:00 PM
Really liked the rhythm in this one..Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 1/4/2024 8:13:00 AM
How fun! Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/4/2024 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Miranda! It was a seasonal challenge, that's for sure.
Date: 12/20/2023 7:37:00 PM
Just don't put her in that 'Little Deuce Coupe.' lol.
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Date: 12/14/2023 4:56:00 PM
Quite clearly for the contest and so well done. I looked, I tried, I failed. You might have inspired me to try again, David. But I’d be working for a place because I suspect first place is spoken for.
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Date: 12/14/2023 6:59:00 AM
Lol. Poor snowman better be careful to not get sunburned. You spruced up the holidays with this poem.
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Date: 12/13/2023 7:11:00 PM
What a fun/creative write. I enjoyed this one.  Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 12/13/2023 5:39:00 PM
This is a work of atr, David and being crowned a FAV. I hope this makes POTD. One of the best poems I ever read here.. I wish I could write like you. I admire your imagination.. I know you don’t try to skip away with a coupleets for a fast laugh. Perhaps I’m wrong, but I see this poem having moving on various level.. Congratulations on a great poem. Pangie
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Date: 12/13/2023 5:10:00 PM
A cute ditty just in time for the season. I think I can hear the early Beatles singing this one, David.
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