Tan

Stripped to naked tan
Rubbed with oils then with sand…
Tables made by hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 8:04 PM
cool way to describe it!
Morehead Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 7:53 AM
interesting..... I like it Jeff
Sweetheart Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 7:23 AM
Unique one Robb.. cool third line luv.. looking forward to more tan come hot weather myself ..the bodily kind.. luv..
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