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Tamper Proof Exemplar

Rings, what are they ?
Those gaudy gem encrusted  things displayed  by those in places high and low.
Or on the other hand  the kind that pricks  the ear when one is half asleep.
Incessant earworm.
Authentic ring,
eternal ring, engagement ring.
I wore this lustrous band  or should I say it wore me  out,
ill-fitting token  of affection that no longer fits.
Finger swelling  pawn shop cast off,
fools gold object d’art  swept up in sudsy tides only to  be  swallowed by a viral vortex guzzle.
Geometric arc light, stricken by its own silver rays,
silently preserving magic memories of yore,
stoically the keeper of past dalliance,
fractal shadow creep among the pigeons,
dancing fairground cul-de-sacs.
Closed loop seal a tamper proof exemplar,
clinging desperately to bonds once watertight,
impregnable,
as impregnable as any fortress.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Wow. Love the many kinds of rings you described. Very nice one
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 2:36 PM
Well, a ring is what you make of it be it good or bad. Creative work. I guess it could be a metaphor for a relationship that no longer is working. Sad when people who thought they loved each other no longer do. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
poemtheart Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 12:05 AM
A good poem, very well wrote....word choice and you cleverly used them...good flow of lines....it is amazing to read.... :)
Kerr Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Your kind and constructive review will be acted on for further growth. Thank you so very much indeed. Howard
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