Tall Tales

Tall Tales time will tell so said what will it tell old woman probably a lie

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Pipping Stars

Date: 9/2/2017 9:53:00 AM

lol ... how grey is your hair woman ... dont let me read to far ... huh ... your awesome ...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 9:58:00 AM

my hair is dark red with a sprinkling of silver. I am happy you liked her.

Peter Rees

Date: 8/30/2017 5:50:00 AM

Nice to see you in the PM list Patricia, and thank you for your recent kind words and encouragement. Your Tall Tales I read as a sad reflection on humanity, amongst many other sadnesses we could take from it. Or have I got it wrong ?

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/30/2017 6:57:00 AM

No you have it correctly. I was feeling rather frustrated last night. I love that old wise woman though. Thank you. your writing is superb words written with a heart bone pen.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2017 2:47:00 AM

so few words say so much Patricia... lets hope it's not a tall tale that we hear. personally I would classify this as a senryu rather than a haiku:-( hugs jan xx

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/30/2017 3:07:00 AM

Thank you Jan. I will relook. Appreciate you thought.