Talking To a Star

When you died,
You became a star. 
Of all the times I've cried,
I look up and there you are. 
I talk to you about something,
Your light shines when you agree.
When you laugh you start twinkling,
And I'm glad you're so happy. 
I say I miss you so much. 
I wish you were here with me. 
I cry some more, I miss your touch,
But it's good you're suffer free. 
I tell you about my day,
And you listen. 
And i love the way,
You always start to glisten. 
Talking to a star,
Is not so bad you see,
But no matter how far you are,
In my heart you'll always be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 3:02 PM
This is a completed written poem in rhyme Carmen, that I like very much. - Beautiful! - Wich you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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July 26, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Beautifully written poem here!!! Very toughing!! Enjoyed..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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