Tales of Anacreontic Heart

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Poetic Form: Couplet
Inspired: 2023 December 24

*1st Place*
Anacreontic Couplets
Contest Judged: 2024 January 01
Sponsored by: Silent One

Image: N/A

Tale's the days that made eyes ~s w a y through pools of blues swam a~w a y leisured a maroon heart~b e a t tangent harmonious ~s u i t e whispers occasions al~l u r e coursing a night of a~m o u r Luna affirms the one~n e s s Bacchus poured vessel vi~n o u s an emotional grow~i n g Cupid perfects his aim~i n g Cherubs playing harps a~f l o a t a couple boards their dream~b o a t

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/12/2024 6:21:00 PM

Dear William, congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest with this romantic gem. Lovely imagery and rhymes. Warmest wishes and Aloha, my friend.. ~Susan

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/12/2024 6:50:00 PM

Winged this one, yet, Susan, thank you, my friend. Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2024 9:59:00 AM

So romantic. And the rhyming words were. Beautifully displayed

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/3/2024 10:43:00 AM

If 'twasn't for googler, they'd be hints of chickens clawed remnants--Mucho grande, thanks, Andrea. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/1/2024 2:38:00 PM

I love how you formed this!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/1/2024 2:50:00 PM

Ah, Kim, watery ~ must be a trait, hope your eve was less crackery. Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2024 10:38:00 AM

slight typo with Cupid's, but I let it slide.. nice and creative.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/1/2024 11:20:00 AM

Most everybody's potential submission had more than one stanza hence the revision, and my notable error was timed prompted as the effective change was at the perilous juncture of: This contest is CLOSED, egad ... thanks Silent One-->now I'm off to my Premiere, ugh--v e r y d i f f i c u l t