Notes About The Poem

 

Poetic Form: Couplet
Inspired: 2023 December 24

 

*1st Place*
Anacreontic Couplets
Contest Judged: 2024 January 01
Sponsored by: Silent One

 

Image: N/A

 

Tales of Anacreontic Heart

Tale's the days that made eyes ~s w a y through pools of blues swam a~w a y leisured a maroon heart~b e a t tangent harmonious ~s u i t e whispers occasions al~l u r e coursing a night of a~m o u r Luna affirms the one~n e s s Bacchus poured vessel vi~n o u s an emotional grow~i n g Cupid perfects his aim~i n g Cherubs playing harps a~f l o a t a couple boards their dream~b o a t
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Ashley Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Dear William, congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest with this romantic gem. Lovely imagery and rhymes. Warmest wishes and Aloha, my friend.. ~Susan
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 6:50 PM
Winged this one, yet, Susan, thank you, my friend. Aloha, William
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 9:59 AM
So romantic. And the rhyming words were. Beautifully displayed
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 10:43 AM
If 'twasn't for googler, they'd be hints of chickens clawed remnants--Mucho grande, thanks, Andrea. Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 2:38 PM
I love how you formed this!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Ah, Kim, watery ~ must be a trait, hope your eve was less crackery. Aloha, William
One Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 10:38 AM
slight typo with Cupid's, but I let it slide.. nice and creative.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Most everybody's potential submission had more than one stanza hence the revision, and my notable error was timed prompted as the effective change was at the perilous juncture of: This contest is CLOSED, egad ... thanks Silent One-->now I'm off to my Premiere, ugh--v e r y d i f f i c u l t
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