Tales

A wispy tail flicks
Dancing for unwary prey
A tale of hunger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Hi Justin, you Haiku is alive with vivid imagery and energy. It really gives the sense of calm before the moment of the pounce..! Great poem :)
Clason Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Susan!
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:06 PM
How true it is!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Awesome Haiku! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 1:15 PM
- A great haiku, Justin - I like to write haikus poems - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // S.S.
Leong Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:43 AM
nice! i actually saw a monitor lizard swiping its tail! i live near a secondary jungle, so we used to see them scurry here and there. good imagery. cheers!
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