Tales

A wispy tail flicks Dancing for unwary prey A tale of hunger

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/2/2017 8:59:00 AM

Hi Justin, you Haiku is alive with vivid imagery and energy. It really gives the sense of calm before the moment of the pounce..! Great poem :)

Justin Clason
Date: 9/3/2017 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Susan!

Donna Roberts

Date: 8/19/2017 8:06:00 PM

How true it is!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/19/2017 3:20:00 PM

Awesome Haiku! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2017 1:15:00 PM

- A great haiku, Justin - I like to write haikus poems - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // S.S.

John Leong

Date: 8/19/2017 11:43:00 AM

nice! i actually saw a monitor lizard swiping its tail! i live near a secondary jungle, so we used to see them scurry here and there. good imagery. cheers!