Talent's Talent

Got a name?,
you are lazy and lame,
when advertised you bring fame,
coz of you this mind plays a dirty game,
without heed your visions are lame,
mindless fantasies are your game,
show you the door and you bring shame,
to my existence and i feel framed,
diversify lives and have me blamed,
brilliance and vibes you have claimed,
what am i without your name?,
soothed me when in pain,
loser i'd be to miss your fast train,
lift my spirits and energies drain,
drenched in your shadowed rain,
blind for long and muted in vain,
can't leave me now insane,
get you patent?
oh! talent's talent?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spence Sr Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 4:38 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
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July 2, 2010 at 9:52 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured Rhonda Hero
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June 29, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Rinki. Love, Carol
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June 28, 2010 at 10:25 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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June 28, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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June 28, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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June 9, 2010 at 6:39 AM
The lines flow very well. The rhyming pattern also moves the poem along. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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