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Talented Stratosphere

Caressing the clouds, I felt sky’s heartbeat. Stratospheric song; I heard; It twanged my silver cord.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/27/2018 3:20:00 AM
I do not like my silver cord to be twanged, but you have made it sound like fun sort of. I love it that you felt sky's heartbeat. That's amazingly accurate. Smart thinking, M.L.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/27/2018 5:32:00 AM
Fortunately, the twang doesn't hurt but, it does sort of tickle, hee! Thanks so much.
Date: 9/26/2018 10:47:00 PM
Oh I like the line, I felt sky's heartbeat. Nice :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/26/2018 11:02:00 PM
Thanks, it's a very warm and friendly one, too.

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