Talented Stratosphere

Caressing the clouds, I felt sky’s heartbeat. Stratospheric song; I heard; It twanged my silver cord.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:20 AM
I do not like my silver cord to be twanged, but you have made it sound like fun sort of. I love it that you felt sky's heartbeat. That's amazingly accurate. Smart thinking, M.L.
Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 5:32 AM
Fortunately, the twang doesn't hurt but, it does sort of tickle, hee! Thanks so much.
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Oh I like the line, I felt sky's heartbeat. Nice :)
Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:02 PM
Thanks, it's a very warm and friendly one, too.
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