Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

Talent

Talent rarely leads to fame
Though many play the waiting game,
Thinking if they just believe,
The things they want, they will achieve.

But luck’s a factor we can’t trust;
Expecting it turns dreams to dust.
It’s best to take defeat in stride
While never letting hope subside.

The irony, as you may guess,
Is that, for many, their success
Won’t bring the joy and peace of mind
That those with less success may find.

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Gershon Wolf January 15, 2024 at 8:08 PM A very, very thought-evoking subject, Ilene. thanks for sharing, gw

Maurice Rigoler January 10, 2024 at 7:29 PM Another gem here, Ilene. I'm satisfied that I at least can write poems to my satisfaction – some at least. There in lies my success. / Maurice

Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2024 at 5:49 AM Such truth! The process must be enjoyed. Those who find “less success” could be the more successful with joy and peace if they are thankful. Happy New Year, Ilene! Ilene Bauer January 10, 2024 at 11:36 AM happy new year to you, too, kim! thank you for taking the time to read and comment...

Daniel Henry Rodgers January 9, 2024 at 6:11 PM Ilene, your poem is a poignant reminder that success isn't always about fame. Your words beautifully convey the essence of perseverance and resilience, urging us to embrace setbacks while holding onto hope. The way you explore the irony of success and happiness is thought-provoking and deeply resonant. Brilliantly penned! - Blessings, Daniel Ilene Bauer January 10, 2024 at 11:35 AM thank you for that thoughtful and beautifully expressed comment, daniel! much appreciated...

Terry Flood January 9, 2024 at 4:03 PM Which is why I’m happy to be an ‘International Poet’ rather than a celebrity ;-) Some will go for it, a few will find it… and then discover that the public ‘owns’ them. Another ‘nail on head’ write from you, Ilene. Enjoyed. Terry Ilene Bauer January 10, 2024 at 11:34 AM thank you, mr. "international poet!" what inspired this was rewatching "la la land," (a movie i really like) which made me think of all the very talented people in the world who never get the chance to reach the audience they deserve. and, of course, that wouldn't necessarily guarantee happiness anyway...