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immense on the surface, massive in depth yet if overblown.. malevolent: a tortuous reflex.. ..allusive as mercury to grasp: a threat perhaps if assembled and paraded sans modesty

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Date: 11/15/2018 8:02:00 AM
There is truth in the beauty of your poem, Brian. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/15/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Susan for your observations
Date: 11/15/2018 1:01:00 AM
with a bit more work and editing this could be a good poem.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/15/2018 3:36:00 AM
Thanks for your observations Arthur
Date: 11/14/2018 7:18:00 AM
Love this, Brian. Great message.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/14/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Line

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