Talent

immense
on the surface,
massive
in depth
yet 
 if   overblown..
malevolent:
a tortuous
      reflex..
..allusive
    as mercury
to grasp:
a threat
      perhaps
if
assembled
and paraded
sans
   modesty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 8:02 AM
There is truth in the beauty of your poem, Brian. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Strand Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thanks Susan for your observations
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 1:01 AM
with a bit more work and editing this could be a good poem.
Strand Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:36 AM
Thanks for your observations Arthur
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Love this, Brian. Great message.
Strand Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Line
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