S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Tail-rhyme

Tale Less Rhyme-2

Tale less rhyme


A tail rhyme I wanted to write
A perfect one without a blight
For the 'Black eyed' to see

If it turns out to be 'eye rhyme'*
Don’t consider it a big crime
It's my humble plea.


*  Words spelled similarly but pronounced differently.

30/ Nov/12
For Black eyed Susan’s contest

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Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2013 at 10:38 PM gosh, how in the world did I ever miss this one. I always try to congratulate the winners of Susan's contests!! And I love her tail rhyme contests. You did really well here. I especially loved when you called her the "black eyed" so funny, jag! and big belated Congratulations to you.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 11:04 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Jag. Love Carol

Sara Kendrick December 7, 2012 at 10:17 AM Great thinking on this winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2012 at 5:01 PM Jag... another wonderful win... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 4, 2012 at 1:38 PM Another stunner jag I like this approach. Congratulations xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2012 at 9:51 AM congrats Jag on a cool and clever write luv and super win..hope all is well ..

Gwendolen Song December 4, 2012 at 9:09 AM the fact that u wrote this so quickly is also a sign of your quick-wittedness...great job!

Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 8:08 AM Good one, congrats.

Gwendolen Song December 4, 2012 at 7:42 AM I think u and I were thinking similarly when we tackled this contest, don'tcha think? Fun write, Jag...and nice word play! :) gwendolen

Kash Poet December 4, 2012 at 7:37 AM Haha...Enjoyed this one very much jag!Congrats on the win.

Charlotte Puddifoot December 3, 2012 at 4:55 AM jag, how could writing such sweet rhyme be a crime? :)

Poet Destroyer A November 30, 2012 at 12:40 PM Jag, ha..love this... good luck in the contest..pd

Richard Palmer November 29, 2012 at 8:54 PM great write Jag,minor crime,minimum sentence,lol,best of luck