Taking Turns

suet feeder
squirrel and stellar jays
taking turns
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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 8:58 PM
I love how your imagery paints an action picture in the mind. This is a wonderful haiku Chetta. Congratulations on your sixth place win! Blessings xxoo
Liguori Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 11:45 AM
nice visuals. congrats on placement.
Kauffman Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations on your win Chetta. This is a lovely observation - a peek into the secret life of nature. All the best.
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 10:52 AM
lovely haiku, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Agustin Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually delight in squirrels... since I haven't seen one yet in its natural habitat (except in the zoo once). God bless you.
Canerdy Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Good one, Chetta. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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