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Taking Turns

suet feeder squirrel and stellar jays taking turns

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/4/2022 8:58:00 PM

I love how your imagery paints an action picture in the mind. This is a wonderful haiku Chetta. Congratulations on your sixth place win! Blessings xxoo

Robert James Liguori

Date: 2/3/2022 11:45:00 AM

nice visuals. congrats on placement.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/3/2022 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Chetta. This is a lovely observation - a peek into the secret life of nature. All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2022 10:52:00 AM

lovely haiku, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/2/2022 7:18:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually delight in squirrels... since I haven't seen one yet in its natural habitat (except in the zoo once). God bless you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/2/2022 6:22:00 PM

Good one, Chetta. CONGRATS on your win. Janice