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Taking the Road Home

sunshine silhouettes on the path, no sign of hatred no sign of wrath blue birds flying in the sky no sign of lonliness no sign of why brown, black, and white dogs running down the street no sign of sadess no sign of weep leaves from a tree flowing in the air no sign of hurt no sign of where children laughing and joking around no sign of worrying no sign of frown me, myself, and i taking each step in pride the signs are all there but deep inside

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Date: 12/17/2009 6:06:00 PM
To live with loneliness, sadness, worry, hatred and hurt in your heart is very difficult. The hatred can be eliminated by conscious choice, but the other emotions you are able to control make you an admirable person. Wish we could all be this strong. You have inspired me, Faire, and gained my respect in this powerful and beautifully written poem. Well Done! Wishing you holidays filled with joy, peace and love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2009 5:35:00 PM
Well let all those smoldering signs of children laughing and spring coming out for all to enjoy. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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