Taking a Gamble - Dizzy

He lives in New York, where skyscrapers cast
 long shadows, and people move fast
 Yet his pace is slow
  To wherever he goes
 
  Years spent in the bottle
 had taken its toll,
 so much of his memory it stole,
 Indeed, so much of his soul

 He had gambled with drugs and booze
 And he lost that bet,
 He had paid his dues
 He still had regrets

 But now he's found sobriety
 His saving grace,
 From a world of notoriety
 To a better place

 He is thankful that life had shuffled the deck,
 And gave him a hand he could play
 Otherwise he'd been a wreck,
 Living in a world of gray..

 8-13-19
 Bring A Character To Life Contest
 Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcgee Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Hey Joseph, nicely penned. Congrats on your win.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 1:04 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and brining Dizzy to life.
May Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thank you for my placement Richard..
Roper Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 9:15 PM
Congratulations on this fictional write. Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 2:56 PM
you really brought the character to life well dear Joseph, really enjoyed this tale, congrats :)-luloo
Proxenos Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Well penned my friend, I couldn't agree with you more - sobriety so much more preferable from a world of notoriety due to drugs, drinking and gambling. Good luck in the contest Joseph. Hugs, Jennifer.
Chiri Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 2:55 AM
Wonderful poem Joseph!;)
Nicole Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 4:17 PM
It's wonderful when, those suffering from an addiction turn things around for the better. It's never too late for help. This is so beautifully expressed and presented. ~ Brandy
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 5:04 AM
- Many suffer his fate ... - A great poem, Joseph, good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 6:40 PM
wow you definitely gave him life, i could see this one unfolding within your lines... great poem :) hugs
Sands Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 3:00 PM
You definetly brought a character to life with this poem Joesph. So nice to see the turn of events in a positive way. Well written!
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Glad his life shuffled deck..not an easy task to overcome like he did..he speaks to us through your poem, Joseph..well portrayed.
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:26 AM
you portrayed dizzy so vividly glad to see the poem had a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
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