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Taking A Few Minutes

We had another hospital run today I called the ambulance because I was concerned They took him to the hospital They said we are taking really good care of him I still say something is wrong, but all his vitals are good His chest was clear, and his blood work said no infection I am glad it all checked out to his good, but I am still concerned. When Eagles Soar Venus in the East Sirius bright and shining October's gift to me Upon this stressful morning. Dawn cracks with gold and red Wispy clouds streak the sky A gauzy eagle flies atop outspread Like ghostly apparition fly. An eagle of clouds reminding me Christians shall rise! One morning at the hospital when I was feeling low I looked out the window and saw the sun rising
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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Oh my. To see how hopeful you were beforehand. This is so lovely but sad knowing the aftermath
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:41 AM
When we were getting ready to leave the hospital (cancer), a woman arrived with the supplies (just enough for a few days) plus the pump and containers to use to suction him 24 hours a day, I said we are not going to need that very long; just a few months and she said they all say that right in front of my husband. That made me angry at her, but I kept quiet. Sara K
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:38 PM
Yes, Andrea, I knew on Thursday morning when we went back to the hospital that there was a change and somethings wasn't right even after they said all was good. I was hoping when we were at The City of Hope that he would go home, rest up and then start taking some form of treatment, but it did not work out that way. Sara K
Onclaud Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 8:35 PM
may you stay hopeful and positive!
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 6:04 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate the uplifting thoughts. Sara K
Swan Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Sunrise has that other-worldly aura. So glad you had that vision to orient when you were so stressed. J x
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Jeanette. I appreciate your nice comments. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 2:38 AM
- Concerns should be taken seriously... it's you, who knows your husband, Sara - Thinking of you - A beautiful sunshine - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 5:31 AM
Anne-Lise, he passed around 10:20 on Thursday night at home after the emergency room that morning. Thank you for your nice comments. Sara K
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