Jacob Preston-Bridges Poet Rhyme

Taking a Bounce

Taking a bounce, I say you should join me,
You will see what I mean. 
The wild whip of the air against your ears, A cry of a chorus full of cheers, 
The feeling of freedom in the veins,
A rush like that you can get from trains,
The sharp sudden smell of empty air,
A smell that gives a powerful stare.

Come jump with me, I swear- Oh I swear-
You will feel it.
Feel the terrific truth of the height
Feel the inspiration of a birds flight
Feel the air tell you what is true
Feel the let loose light spread to you.
Feel the 

Jump.

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Sheri Fresonke Harper January 24, 2020 at 6:28 PM Congratulations Jacob, on your honorable place finish in the Jump contest. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering. I felt the jump well, good use of senses, but oops, you broke the don't use Jump rule.

Silent One December 24, 2019 at 11:37 AM as long as you look before you leap.. then why not...