Taken To Soon

TAKEN TO SOON

                        A piece of my heart died today.
                Benny left us here cause he couldn't stay.
              There was so many things he wanted to say.
             We will all miss him while he's on heavens way.
                 He was so funny and had a great smile.
                    Telling us jokes was just his style.
                He was a wonderful son and a loving dad.
         If he was your friend he was the best you ever had.
      Micheal,Geno,Buddy,Daniel,Kevin,Dustin the list is so long.
             Now all of his friends will have to stay strong.
          His life wasn't long but he left us three treasure's.
     Ashley,Morgan,Daniel his love for them can't be measured.
                 We all will always love and miss you Benny.
                   From all your friends there are so many.
In loving memory of Benjamin Joseph Hamilton  Born 08/03/76 Died 11/23/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/16/2012 8:24:00 AM
My condolences on your loss. A great dedication to a very sad loss.
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Date: 5/16/2012 8:13:00 AM
My condolences on your loss. A great dedication to a very sad loss.
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Date: 4/12/2012 3:20:00 PM
What a great work honoring your son..I know that you and your family and his family will surely miss him..Sara
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Date: 3/26/2012 2:27:00 PM
A heartfelt write Teresa,, i am pleased to know of Benjamin; through these expressions of yours, hope you are well.. Joe..)
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:18:00 PM
Soo sad.....losing a good friend and at such young age. Bless you Benny all your friend miss you. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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