Taken Control

I want the pain to go away
to be able to wake up and enjoy my day
can you explain how I'm suppose to be 
because the loss of you has taken control of me
so please someone explain what I'm suppose to do
because I can not deal with the fact that this is all true.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 5, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Chantelle, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT
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June 29, 2011 at 2:18 AM
i can but feellyour words and the power they carry, it like we wake up and lie our lives at yesderdy was the truth, and we dont have to, powerfull ,yet loads of empthy like ti her you sing more Hemi. PS thanks for what you sain about my poem
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