Taken Care Of

I never knew 
What you were, a boy or a girl,
Just that you were mine,
My baby, for a time.

Before you were sucked out
Of your warm little nest.
Before you were thrown 
In the trash like the rest.

I would have kept you safe,
If I’d had the chance.
I would’ve loved you dearly,
If I’d been your “Dad.”

But you were stolen from me
Like a pickpocket’s score,
Discarded when empty,
Then abandoned, ignored.

I still can't believe it!
How I long for lost time!
The “could have been’s” haunting, 
Like guilt ridden minds…

You were my boy, or my girl,
I guess I'll never divine...
But you’ll always be Mine,
My baby, in my heart for all time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 2:07 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Sue. Awesome. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "father & beyond" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:19 PM
oh, my gosh, susan, how did I never see this before? WAs it posted very recently?? It's marvelous!!! soupmail (and congratulations)
Rozario Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Very touching poem Susan...congrats!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!YOU ARE INCREDIBLE!YOUR MORE LIKE A BLACK MAMBA! THE WORD YOU SPEW IS POWERFUL!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations on your win Susan very moving xx
A   Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 9:48 PM
Susan, a wonderful congrats in my contest... I have to say, i was moved by the whole issue,,, and heartbreaking moments you had to sit and wonder why??.... I don't know why?? I better stop now, before I get my emotions all wrapped up again... I too have lost... thank you very much for entering this one for my contest... always..pd
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June 20, 2012 at 9:47 PM
Congrats on your win, Susan. Your poem is heartbreaking and I'm sorry I wasn't able to finish it tonight. Enough time has not passed and feelings are still too raw for me. Big hugs to you. Love, Rhonda
Minardi Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Interesting writing, Susan. I like how you interpret the situation.. Congrats for the win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Congrats Susan on another well deserved sweet success in one stand out day contest with this electrifying entry my friend...luv..
Quigley Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 4:46 PM
Wow, I can feel the pain here Susan. Nice win, but a sad event. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Frank's "One Stand Out Day" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Thanks for yhe lovely comment you left for me. This one of yours made me sad because I lost an unborn child myself.
Zzzzz Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 7:00 AM
A poignant and thought-provoking write. Poems like this need to be written.
Jones Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:36 PM
dude! now that's a write! keeper up, please, you inspire me. Thanks. Namaste~N
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