Take Your Time

Somethings are better left untold
Somethings are better if you let go
Sometimes, you forget your identity 

And the oceans will bring a nobody
Just a wave, to please everybody
A wind, rush of emotions, you waive anyway 

The sun will surely smile today
To you who wished upon a star
We'll break up the unhappy club 

Seek better days to find "us"
Never, what we became momentarily 

So take your time...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/21/2021 10:31:00 AM
Hello Tele Boy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. This poem speaks to me. the message is loud and clear. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2021 10:48:00 AM
Hello Tele Boy, What type of music do you play? What type of songs do you sing-if you sing? Do you have a band? Or do you play an instrument? How long have you been a musician? I know lots of questions. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Tele Boy
Date: 9/22/2021 8:46:00 PM
I am practicing my lyrics writing because I'm a musician and I never had to deal with words up until now. So this website seems like a perfect journal to track my progress! Thank you very much!!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2021 12:27:00 PM
Hello Tele Boy, I will be reading more of your poetry so create more poetry. Thank you I also wish you a nice day. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Tele Boy
Date: 9/21/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, I'm glad it reached you. Likewise, I wish you a nice day!!
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