Take the Shot

One in my quiver
Seeing her made me shiver….
Point to deliver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:04 AM
cupids shot?? enjoyed
Roberts Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:30 AM
now I'v got "Cupid, draw back your bow... " running through my head, how long will the song be stuck this time, oh well, good one Robb, I like this senryu
Mehta Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Thanks for your comments on my poem Diwali. Please share my blogs on Diwali festival,Robb
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