Take the Right Path Or Wrong Path But Make It Smart

theres was a girl that was lost in the woods 
the angel looked down at her and said that 
gods ready whenever her mission was done
her BFF was lost in the hole in depreesion 
just like she was til she found her savior 
and the who died for her and her sins
19 years has pasted since her and her BFF 
sherley was both lost now the father of jesus christ said 
im the judge of wrongs and the rights.since both of there deaths 
the mother of the girls had put the wrongs to the 
side and went to church and satin didnt like it at all wat 
soever because they didnt follow orders.and god told the girls to 
make a spirtal presance in there homes and try to talk to the mothers 
so theyll understand that they are fine and in heaven with jesus christ their savior.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 6:57 PM
Amanda - I enjoyed the message in this poem - God Bless, MJ
Montgomery Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Sweet poem amanda..very sad but true...
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